A good read

[Cole Parker]

I stumbled across this story, Button, while looking for something else.  I highly recommend it.  Some might find it a bit saccharine, but it's my kind of story.  Give it a try.

http://www.gayauthors.org/story/cole-matthews/button

C

 

[Lugnutz]

Good read thus far. It reminds me a bit of your 'When he was five' story.

[colinian]

What impressed me about Button is even though there were a lot of characters, they were easy to remember and I didn't get confused. With one exception. Button = Craig and Dad = Craig was very confusing sometimes.

Colin

 

[Cole Parker]

I agree that that was occasionally confusing and could have been fixed simply by attaching a 'junior' label onto Button.  There were a few places where editing would have helped, but overall, I found the writing to be first rate.

 

C