to those who haven't read my drivel, here it is
http://www.thescribblerspad.com/lugnutz.html
would like to see what y'all think, opinion, constructive criticism, etc. i'm not planning on doing any kind of a re-write, but to improve my future works.
this story is my first ever effort at writing, if you think it sucks, blame scribbler. it was his idea.
i can see an evoloution in the way it's writtin, from the first chap to the present.
flames will be laughed at and ignored.
thanks y'all!