DJ

Gonna march in your army Codey,woo hoo,cool poem :smt066 :smt023

good poem,and hits home alot :smt032

way cool poem :smt023 just hope wasn't you

its true life.good poem :smt036

Wow,that was very good :smt036 :clap:

LMAO, to cool :smt066

You call me son and gave me a name The little guy you said always laughed and smiled. As i got older so many feelings inside A different look things i grew to hide Questioning my feelings so afraid they wouldn't leave Having to accept them ashamed to admit were me. Someday you will know the real me the boy who crys wanting you to see Wishing you could see into my eyes the love and hurt inside So much of me is lost forever hoping you will understand The secret i hold is still the boy you used to know Do you know me

says it all,awesome poem Codey :smt023 :smt036

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Thanks Tr,i definately will read them,and yes i think Codeys "Unicorn" poem is totally awesome :smt025

gotta love it, as you eagerly read on,what a cool ending,lol i do like your style :smt023

way cool, (applause) 8)

LOL, thats way cool, hehe :-D

i'm almost speechless,i think this is maybe the best i've read Codey.I don't know what to say,except its awesome. 8)

only one spelling mistake ,lol thanks for letting me know,i fixed it :oops:

Carousel trying one without my editors help :-) Random thoughts on a never ending carousel Stopping occasionally to add excitement,bewilderment,confusion To grasp ahold of one needing a grip so tight Trying to make sense find a place where it belongs Mostly imaginary dreams we wish will come true For true happiness and love seeking the courage to be Being just me The carousel keeps turning always bringing a new day As long as it keeps going theres hope for better days DJ :-)

Thanks guys :o .James i tried to reply back to you,but its not letting me send PM,but thanks.No AJ,i will think a little better as to what too i use,i've seen the "to" posts ,i have to learn the right ones

The alarm go's off reality slipping back into consciousness eyes begging to remain closed Faint thoughts and shadows from the minds night wanderings not really remembering to illusive to grasp and hold.

thanks guys :-) i don't consider myself a poet,just sometimes due to emotions,and feelings about stuff,i think about trying to say how i'm feeling,wish it was for different reasons.Codey has been a very good friend of mine,and is helping me alot,through friendship,and showing me how to express things alot better.Hopefully if i can do another poem,will be a little brighter one.thank you for the nice replys :-)

thanks Codey,for helping me with it,make it sound little intelligent :D ,but the food thing,that will take time,thank you my friend

"The Next Step" by DJ Remembering a time,when so simple were things that could make me smile,could make me dream. The older I become,and with doors opening to me, I'm still hanging onto the safe things around me. Stepping forward so tentatively,I'm not sure i'm ready for where life will lead me. Trying to find confidence and courage within, but feeling so fragile while hiding in this shell. Afraid to take the next step in my life, and knowing everyone has too. Wishing I had a hand to guide me, To show others,whats inside me. The real me.

Leaves alot to the imagination For once you have left me speechless :roll: