I have to agree with the author here and say that these first four chappies are rather poorly written. This is more from the style of its writing. For example the constant stat descriptions of each character, not only on their introductions but also throughout the chapters....as in ''Jeff was 5ft 11, muscular with brown hair....'' ''Drew...had sandy blond hair, green eyes and stood only 5ft 8...''...''Catching his reflection....he admired his 6ft muscular, eighteen year old frame and tanned...''
This I find to be rather jarring and a poor way of describing characters. This sort of thing occurs all of the way through the text...''flashing straight white teeth''....''hurling his 180lb frame''...''the beast paused, crouching on his muscular abs''
This style makes for a poorly written attempt at describing the appearance of characters as well as trying too hard in telling the reader how good looking they are.
However, the redeeming feature of the story is its plot, which admittedly draws the reader in. The author is not revealing every aspect of the story straight away but is allowing it to be pieced together bit by bit. Each chapter we are learning something exciting and new. The action is fast paced and is described with good detail. I am indeed looking forward to the next chapter.