Hi Oliver, yes it was a fast ending. That's partly because the story lay fallow for a long time while I spent time having and recovering from neck surgery. The surgery left me, at least temporarily, with no feeling in my hands. That makes it difficult to touch-type. I've embarked on a new story with the help of a voice-recognition program which works well except that it seems to have lost one of my chapters, which I shall now have to reconstruct. Anyway, thanks so much for writing.