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Merkin

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  1. Wow, that is in the boonies, Jason.  I was more-or-less a Scranton--Wilkes-Barre barfly, with occasional forays toward Allentown and Harrisburg. Far easier to go north, over the line into New York State, where the drinking age was 18 throughout my high school years and fake ID was more convincing. 
    Gourmet burgers, ribs, and wings, oh my!  That's certainly not the bar food of my youth.

  2. it's great to read of your successful transition from Pennsylvania backwoods boy to Wing-Man to the rich and famous, Jason.  I’ve followed your ups and downs over the years and you are more than deserving of a happy ending.

    BTW, where was that crummy tavern in PA?  There's a slight chance I drank soapy draft and ate pickled eggs and phony cutlets bellied up to its bar many long years ago.

  3. These are two great sets of comment on writing, and taken together they are almost a complete manual on how to move a manuscript from start to finish.  For me, these suggestions boil down to attitude and persistence: a writer has got to believe in what he is writing about, and he has to try many routes to get to the end he has had in sight from the start.  Thanks, Jason and Cole, for taking the time and making the effort to explain how the process works for you.

  4. My heart goes out to Julian, and David, and you, and all presently involved in Julian's care. One of the greatest desires of any fifteen- year-old is to be independent of his family, and that motivation is ideally what drives the development of maturity and understanding and the assumption of responsibility for oneself. But how can that work well when there has never been the buy-in to the concept of family in the first place? It's a tragic situation, and I can't conceive of any way that seven months with you could have repaired the destruction wrought by the preceding fourteen and a half years of Julian's life.

  5. I offer you this:

    Gardening

    A meditation

    Each day, grow.

    Watering:

    Regard your self within the world.

    Tell your self the world has nurtured you.

    Tell the world how your self has contributed.

    Together we all are the garden.

    Tending:

    Look for the spent leaf and cull it.

    Bind up wounds and wrap weak limbs.

    Cleanse infestations that eat at the heartwood.

    Prune to a shape that pleases.

    Blooming:

    Prepare the blossom.

    Cultivate beauty and restful harmony.

    Arrange a presentation to complement others.

    Contemplate your handiwork.

    Regard your self within the world.

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