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Nevius

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  1. I agree that the story should be added to best of nifty. And also agree it could use a thorough pass by an editor. Yet despite the extra effort it takes it is worth it for the depth of characters and setting. I somehow feel it is not going to be a long story either. Spring is coming. Let's hope we're not disappointed.
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    Map

    Thanks Jan for figuring it out!
  3. Josh, What a great story! Don't ever worry about coming out...of your box. Beautifully written it truly conveys the feellings going on. Thanks! Nevius
  4. I have to agree with Jan. I think TOSOM is a great story but it would be worth it for Dom to crank out the last two chapters...or how ever many he decides to do. This is definately a story that works better reading straight through without long gaps. All of Dom's stories have been great...I can't wait for him to finish this one so he can get back to finish his previous one!!!
  5. TR, Halloween is great to delve into the twisted sides of our minds. And you did it very well....yet it could have been set in any state not just here in Louisiana!!! Although I have to agree with you that it's an appropriately twisted here. Thanks for the "fun" Nevius PS Slaughter is up Rt. 19 not 33 from BR.
  6. Thanks all, I enjoyed writing Halloween Dance too. I was in a good mood and having fun so I think it came through to the story. We'll all have to do this more often. Don't you think Dude?
  7. The Point has got a point and it's a good one. Thanks WBMS! Really enjoyed it!
  8. Thank you Josh. SOF was a great vacation indeed. I certainly enjoyed my time at the shack. Maybe next summer we can all return?
  9. Jamie, It is always a pleasure to see a new chapter posted...I can certainly understand the experiments of Pavlov. LOL I just wish your chapters came out more frequently...yes, it's a good addiction though. Although it just gives me more time to stay current with all of the other writers here at AD. I have one serious request though. A Map. I have tried to lay one down but without reading all of the way through again I don't remember enough to make it accurate. It would make it easier to understand all of the movement that is now taking place. I wouldn't mind helping out either. What do you think? Nevius
  10. Thank you Dude. The better head prevailed. (no smartass remarks please)
  11. oh i think its just the calm before the storm....and that's from someone who lives in New Orleans! LOL be patient littlebuddah
  12. Thanks Blue I'm glad you get it and I agree with what you've written. Hopefully I haven't gone down a well worn path. I don't think so but I'll be looking forward to your commentary. Thanks again
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