Oliver

It's a great story Alan! The first chapter grabbed me, but after that you grow with the development of Tyler. Oliver

Started today with the first fifteen chapters and it got me sucked into it. Mixed feelings about Alex, and I feel sorry for the sweet Matty. That, together with the supsense about things happening around school, you've got yourself a pageturner to read and read. I like it, despite the fact that after finishing the last available chapter, the calendar will now decide when I am going to turn the next page. 🙂 Thank you, William!

It's getting difficult.... Not so nice for the main character, but very nice for the reader of this, again, brilliant story. 🙂 Thank you, Cole!

To be honest, I like the sequel of two times a week, or even once a week. If a story is complete, I always hesitate to start, because of the amount. (And the knowledge of being unable to stop halfway. ? ) The extra benefit is that the characters are "with you" for several weeks, combined with the curiosity of what will happen a few days later. It makes a story more "alive".

Hope you're back and well soon, Alan!

Wahhh, that was a fast ending! Thank you for the story!

Only two more? Mixed feelings always. It soothens my curiosity on how it will end, but it also means that the warm travel with the characters will stop. Looking forward to it, that's a fact!

Bumped into this one, just roaming on AD to have something to read. I wanted not too much, because I have to write for my own site in Dutch. Not too much distraction.... ? There was one chapter, that couldn't do any harm, could it? Shouldn't have done that. I got hooked. Six chapters already, with a great development; caring, sweet, coming-of-age theme, with some extra twiches I am not goint to mention here to avoid being the big spoiler for people who haven't started this story yet. But you should! Thanks Alan, I like it a lot. Isaiah and Kieran are in my mind, and I am curious how they will figure it out together. I am confident they will!

Great beautiful story indeed!

Wow, last chapter, that's fast all of a sudden! That was the first thing I thought when i saw "final" in red print. After reading it: not to fast, it is just complete, good developments. Without giving any spoiler to anybody who read this first before the last chapter: I liked the epilogue. ? Thumbs up, thank you again Cole! Altimexis, you can start reading again. You'll like it. ?

You're right Cole. How cunning your plan may be, when it really works, it is the best feeling you can have as a writer.

And what a start. You can picture him right from the beginning. You can feel compassion immediately. A bit of happyness at the start of the camp, with a possible friction, all in the first chapters. Like it very much allready. You got me hooked again! ?

You can throw one, Cole. With words. Right on the spot were it's needed to be. Thank you!

No. It's you that pushes our curiosity ahead. The big "why"-card that you play wonderful as always. It's why I am immediately hooked when I start to read one of your works. Complaining about that burden? Nah, secretly I love it! :-)

Still one of my favorite writers here on AD. With this good start, as you mentioned Chris, I know I won't be disappointed this time again. Thank you Cole!

Nice story, with a good plot. And a good laugh! Thank you!

Chapter 4. Cliff hangers. Should be forbidden. Still brilliant story though.... :-)

Great start. It made me laugh a good couple of times! I like the way Clint acts, thinks... You got me to follow this one!

I had the luck to just find this new story of Cole. I could read 16 chapters at once. :-) Forced to wait now like everybody else.... You did it again Cole! Nice work.

Promising, promising.... As always with Cole's story. Count me in as a regular follower. :)

Thanks for sharing that. Wish you all the luck and strength you need. I know how it feels. (never made it, but you don't want to hear that, I think.)

We can say that too. You're too kind, Cole. Thanks so much for your words in writing, which warm our hearts. It's a really good, nice, heartwarming story. I'm jealous. I want to be able to write like you. Greetings from the not so cold anymore Netherlands, Oliver

Great story, as you said hilarious! Why is everything Cole writes spot on right? Great job agian, Cole!

Cole, First of all, thank you. I'm 43. You can also say; "get real, I was not talking to you, with your 43." Anyhow, I used Google and it came up with this; KILLERS LYRICS Somebody Told Me Breaking my back just to know your name Seventeen tracks and I've had it with this game I'm breaking my back just to know your name But heaven ain't close in a place like this Anything goes but don't blink you might miss Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this I said heaven ain't close in a place like this Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight Never thought I'd let a rumor ruin my moonlight Well somebody told me You had a boyfriend Who looked like a girlfriend That I had in February of last year It's not confidential I've got potential Ready? Let's roll onto something new Taking its toll and I'm leaving without you I'm ready, let's roll onto something new 'Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this I said heaven ain't close in a place like this Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight Never thought I'd let a rumor ruin my moonlight Well somebody told me You had a boyfriend Who looked like a girlfriend That I had in February of last year It's not confidential I've got potential A rushin', a rushin' around Pace yourself for me I said maybe baby please But I just don't know now When all I wanna do is try [x3] Somebody told me You had a boyfriend Who looked like a girlfriend That I had in February of last year It's not confidential I've got potential A rushin', a rushin' around -- Uhmm.... I still don't know the answer. I guess it's a guy who is singing this to a girl, with the strage fact that her boyfriend looked like a girl he was dating earlier...... I feel a connection between those two. I think he does too. For the rest... Get a bottle of Jack Daniels, drink it, and listen again. You must be in the same state of the writer when he wrote the stuff to understand it, i guess...

Brilliant! That lightswitch.... only Catholics can design something like that. The churchwindow, I've seen that one before. I am still curious whitch curch it belongs to. Thanx for a good laugh, James.