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Oliver

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  1. Gather with friends, drink champgane at midnight and watch the fireworks. And eating lots of 'oliebollen'. Trab, help me out here. Can you explain 'oliebollen' in proper English? Beside of that; I wish al of you here at AD all the best things for 2010!
  2. Oliver

    English 10

    It's Cole, it's good. Wonderfull. Liked it very much. More! I liked the concept of the two sories in one, like Merkin said. And, like in every other of Cole's work, you can feel the angst and doubts and anger. Great job.
  3. What could I add more to aal this? I am not going on the uncertain path of saying this was your best story ever, because there were so many more bautiful stories. The end of this one however was beautiful and just how i should be. I enjoyed every part of it. Thanx Cole!
  4. *Agrees with Des* f you don't want to be embarassed, then... No, don't you dare even think about that. Greats chapter. Well done. Be proud.
  5. I've seen good arguments here for telling them and not telling them. Cole said some very wise words, though. If I were in your shoes, I wouldn't do it and wait, for the same reasons. But that's easy to say, from this distance. You are the only one who can know how your sons will presumably react. One thing to add; if you are going to tell them, do it together with your wife. Let them see inmmediately that you both sorted it out, that they immediately can see that things are good between you and that there still will be a loving, caring and solid family. Because there is, I can see in what you are telling here. Respect. For both of you. And your boys. Wish you good luck with this situation. But you all will manage, I'm sure of that.
  6. Very nice story. But it is getting very dark now. You can almost feel the fear.. Great job again, Cole!
  7. A very good read! And mismatching socks.... Where have we seen those before....
  8. Bart is not that special. At least not in the Netherlands My real first name is Harm. It has its origin in the north of the Netherlands. Rare in the south where I live, but not unknown. In English spoken countries however, it means something completely different. Always good for a laugh.... "Relax, its my name, I won't do you any." I never use it on international fora for that reason. Talking about making bad boys because of "bad" names... (it is an abbreviation of Herman, by the way.) I know about the list. It was still there in the early 60's. There was a problem with my sisters second name. Until they showed the birthcertificate of our grandmother. She was named after her. But to be honest, sometimes it wouldn't be a bad idea to re-introduce it. I see names of new borns.... Stigmatised for life.
  9. I'll say it again. I'm a fan of Cole's work. Whithin a few lines you can 'see' in the mind of the caracter. And that is first of all very good, and secondly very nice to read. Like it! Like it!
  10. This kind of situations is very un-Dutch and because of that strange to read. *Spoiler-alert* Like it so far, added it to my favorites! Thanx Trab!
  11. Chapter 6! Thanks for pointing this one out, Trab. Excellent story!
  12. That's exactly what garlic is. Badmouthing....
  13. #1 Calzone And I don't want to know what's in it. Speak about strange combinations; We've got Domino's pizzza here in the NL, and they sell pizza with shoarma... (And Trab; every normal person hates the taste and smell of garlic. )
  14. This is one of those stories on which, after I read it, I remained silence and stared at my screen for a while... Doesn't happen very often, but now it did. I'm impressed. Very.
  15. Oliver

    Graeme again

    Chapter 4 is up! And it is getting more and more complex and confusing..... I like that.
  16. And that's exactly the same with chapter 4!
  17. Oliver

    The Dance

    No way. I've got my standards. In this case it was absolutely the result of your writing. The way you've set the atmosphere. How did Des call it? So vivid and accurate. You really have a gift.
  18. Oliver

    The Dance

    Great story. Nice. Funny. Sweet. Yep, that's the word. Sweet.
  19. My post will be like the ones above. Well done absolutely! And Cole, thanks for another cliffhanger like this... (We want chapter 2! ) Oliver
  20. I did, I did! Option 5, to be more precisely. If I translated that right. But some % of nothing is still nothing, right? When I see Trab's solution I am jealous in some way....
  21. Agree. Totally. Just like with his first novel.
  22. Wibby, Clich? story asks for a clich? comment. Wow, hot piece of work. I had a good wank with it. Several times. Thank you. Let him f*ck the jock in the next chapter! Now, seriously; it was hilarious. Funny piece of work. I had a good laugh with it. Several times. Thank you. Oliver, who is curious already for the comments you'll get after you've posted it on Nifty......
  23. It wasn't that bad after all. To be honest, it was kind of nice. In a funny/furry way.......
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