Tien

No, not at all you guys are great. I'm glad to be getting any comments at all. Comments imply that you guys actually read and analyze the poem and care enough to tell me about it. Critique or compliment, I'll always listen (or should I say read? lol). Tien

Hi I have been writting poems since I don't remember when, but this is the first time that I actually post one of them. So, comment of most welcome, however, please be gentle, :oops: . Ubobtainable Love By: Tien The thing about love Is that it comes and goes With the breifness of time Time flow, it flows It comes to you On bright summer days And leave you cold In its wake In its present joyous reign But in its absent Eternal rain Generation after generation Endlessly sought Only to slip away breifly abort Unobtainable love Is the fuel of imagination But beware, for its reality will leave you in desolation Well, that's it. Tell me what you think, like I say all comments are welcome.

Hi I had just finish the story, and it was awesome. Thank you Josh for writting it. You can be sure that i'm putting you at the top of my list of favorite authors. Tien