I have just read this story (at least the first three chapters). I'm enjoying it, especially the echoes of good versus evil which I read into two of the characters == the light angel and the dark devil. It seems to me as if we are going to read a variant of the struggle for a person's soul. Kind of intriguing to see that beind done today. I look forward to more chapers. Nicely written.
MontrealOrmolu