Xzor64

Well thank you very much for your words, I greatly appreciate your thoughts on the poem. I agree with you on the title and I guess I hadn't really put the thought into that piece of it, but I see your point now that I do. Glad you enjoyed it =) ~Tyler

Wow I really liked this. I always enjoy a well written poem that manages to rhyme as well, brilliant.

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it~

My eyes alight as I look into his Time freezing where our gazes meet The flame in my heart, smoldering for so long Rekindled in an instant by his warm smile He seems so far away I move towards him but I feel slower than molasses Tears of joy streaming down my face Finally we embrace His strong arms wrapping around me Holding me close I bury my face in his chest My breath warm on his skin I hear his heartbeat in time to mine He runs his fingers through my hair Down my neck Whispering sweet words of love in my ear I look up into his eyes Forgetting everything in the world My legs barely keeping me up Going wobbly He leans in close I feel the light stubble brush across my face It tickles? Our lips meet in a sensation explosion My love pouring out of my soul through my lips I close my eyes, my head spinning If only this moment could last forever I open my eyes again to find? He?s gone? The sunlight dancing through my window? Xzor64 ?2008 Questions, Comments, Testimonials all appreciated.