Milos

VWL wrote me an email and told me that he was posting this forum over here. I'm greatful to have another chance with this story, especially to set up the companion story over the next year or so. I wrote the story in such a way that would reflect the local vernacular and a speaking style (inner monologue) of the main character. In editing, I have been able to keep the voice while making the prose flow a bit better. Also, there are additions and fixes here and there. (Forgive the patients vs patience error, I used to file paperwork in a medical office. I do that with isle and aisle, too.) :) As far as the email address: I am an American. The email address is a relic from my time in college, when I was living in the UK. I have since moved over to gmail. Thanks again for all the support over the years. You guys are the best. :3 Dave Milos