Rutabaga Posted October 16, 2016 Report Share Posted October 16, 2016 I am pretty sure I read this two years ago when (I believe) it was first posted, but it's back as a Pick from the Past and worth having its own thread here. It's a very cool premise and, as Cynus noted in another thread, would be a great setup for a novel. It would be really great to see how Mason and Everett get on. I am a sucker, also, for stories where the lead character (Mason, in this case) discovers that he has special skills or powers that allow him to do unusual things. (Think Jacob in "Miss Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children.") Anyway, it's a fine piece of writing and cries out for more. R Link to comment
ChrisR Posted October 16, 2016 Report Share Posted October 16, 2016 Thanks for pointing it out, Rutabaga. It is indeed a wonderful tale. Of course, it cries out for more. But the story makes it clear that the sequels are in the readers' minds so it's up to us to provide them. Most enjoyable! Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted October 17, 2016 Report Share Posted October 17, 2016 I just read this and it's a wonderful story. I'm not sure I've read if before, but I'd though I'd read all of Chris's work. This one is definitely a keeper! And would make a good Chapter 1. C Link to comment
Lugnutz Posted October 18, 2016 Report Share Posted October 18, 2016 Indeed. You whetted our appetites now we want more. Link to comment
Chris James Posted October 19, 2016 Report Share Posted October 19, 2016 "Two roads diverged in a yellow wood..." Tipping my hat to Robert Frost in this story. In every life there is always the path not taken and I wanted to show just what might be missed in the ordinary life of my character. This short story was never meant to be anything greater. My contribution to the AD tenth anniversary celebration. I just wanted to open a door to that other side and give the readers a glimpse of what might be. That means there will be no sequel, sorry Lugnutz. My thanks to all of you for reading the story. Link to comment
Nigel Gordon Posted July 1, 2020 Report Share Posted July 1, 2020 I remember reading this some time ago. It is nice to read it once more. I am so glad it is in this month's pick of the past. Chris was a great story teller, whose talent is missed. Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted July 1, 2020 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2020 Really happy to see this story reappear, and sad that Chris James is no longer here to receive our plaudits. I stand by my original comments about what a good novel this would be the seed for. R Link to comment
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