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Halloween Engagement by Cole Parker


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I quite liked the beginning, though I thought that the story would end up being his exploration of all of the options, not just one. However, I'm satisfied with the way it turned out :smile: though I'll admit that I thought Ted would turn out to be a Halloween ghost...

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For whatever reason, I didn't think Ted was anything but a live kid. I was wondering though: would Ted's brother's ghost show up and fight off the bullies? I suppose in a way it happened, but through what his brother taught him about defending himself before he went into the Marines.

Colin :icon_geek:

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