Josiah Jacobus-Parker Posted January 3, 2006 Report Share Posted January 3, 2006 Company --(dedicated to the nameless couple in Starbucks) We sit idly in the corner, The velvet couch almost too cozy As quiet music plays softly overhead. We nurse our coffees quietly. I can see a man reading, His foot tips a chair And he rocks it absently. The red lights over the counter And the blue lamps on the tables Make a homely glow And I sink deeper into my seat, Enjoying the caffeinated stupor. A sophisticated woman in a fur coat Comes and sits near us. She takes delicate sips of her latt? And flips through her magazines, Reading up on the lives of celebrities And whatever other gossip That has found it's way into the latest issue. The snow piles softly against The window panes. And I'm glad we're inside. I'm glad we're warm. What are you thinking about? Should I ask? You have a bag of books And when I inquire, You eagerly take them out to show me Your latest purchase. You speak excitedly about them. But I'm not listening. I'm just watching your mouth move, Enjoying the contours and animations of your face. I make a noise of appreciation. But I'm still not listening. Yours is such an open face, So warm and comforting. The wind rattles the glass panes And I break from my reverie. I'm reminded again Of how glad I am we're inside. I know how you enjoy the cold, The outside. But it's too wet to be out. I lean closer to you And rest my head on your shoulder. Your hand finds mine and our fingers entwine. It's subtle, but intimate. Everyone else is drinking their coffee --That's what they come here to do. But we're not. We're enjoying something better: Each other's company. Quote Link to comment
blue Posted January 3, 2006 Report Share Posted January 3, 2006 Wow, what a sweet visit. That's a great slice of life, really simply put, but it's better for that. Clearly it's a cozy place to spend some time. I'm all for the hand-holding, mouth-watching, and books, too. Quote Link to comment
Tragic Rabbit Posted January 3, 2006 Report Share Posted January 3, 2006 I like it very much, Josiah. You write very delicate, and very lovely, poetry. Kisses... TR Quote Link to comment
TalonRider Posted January 3, 2006 Report Share Posted January 3, 2006 I like it also. This coming from someone who normally doesn't read poetry. :oops: Quote Link to comment
Josiah Jacobus-Parker Posted January 5, 2006 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2006 Thanks you guys, I'm glad you liked it. There are a few minor things I'm still not quite happy about, but over all I like how it came out. Blue, I'm not sure if your comment was meant to sound as dirty as it did to me... so I'm gonna pretend it wasnt. And thanks TalonRider, I'll take that as high praise. heh. :D Quote Link to comment
blue Posted January 6, 2006 Report Share Posted January 6, 2006 My comment sounded dirty? If so, my subconscious libido must be working overtime. (Could be.) But nothing bad was intended. :: puts out clean table linens :: Er, all I meant was I liked that the couple in the poem were holding hands, watching their mouths, etc., and those sound like fine activities to me too. Heh, I think I'm being teased. I guess I'm eminently teasable. :) I think I'm just digging the hole deeper now, aren't I? ----- I thought it was a fine poem and fine subjects. Quote Link to comment
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