EleCivil Posted February 9, 2006 Report Share Posted February 9, 2006 A little set of four poems based on four streets I walked on today. And yes, the gate in the last one is the same as the gate in this poem: http://awesomedude.com/bb/viewtopic.php?t=435 The extra dots in the third one are there because my formatting wouldn't show up on the board. Just imagine that they're blank space, instead. -------------- Streets Quartet [southern Security] To Andover crossed with careful watch For fences left unlatched And dogs unchained in full disdain Of passing gratis glance At a corner there were two that stood Grinding gears for tongues But we were born a louder breed Barks rolling from our lungs Hold confidence in swinging hips In eyes a bluster lit For locks can claim their causes just And keep our legs unbit Though sad to see the chains and gates For safety comes a cost Our rolling freedom footfalls worth All paid in others? loss [Westerly Uncertainty] To Vernice strode, beloved, quote Gypsies, release me this curse The world weighs down the ones Caught walking underneath And shoulders strong can crack along The ridges left by bricks Instead of trying to carry me home Just hold me close beside With caution calm and palm to palm We?ll stumble over branches And break our knees together So matching casts our consciousness Can mend these fractured fortunes Futures welded warmest chance With coldest calculations [North-bound Breakspeed] So Stickney stretched for miles on but only feet for us Before the train had roared across to carry Things we?d never get to see to places We?d never find the time to visit And left us running next to it In the opposite direction And running Parallel We could almost Catch up But then We fell back Again And Were Almost Moving Back Wards...................................It Took....................................Us An..................................Entire Train?s...........................Length To......................................Go ........................................Just ........................................Two ....................................Blocks ......................With heavy wind .................Resistance pressing .........Against our faces, throats ......And arms until it sped, sped Up and left us to move at our own speed again Time travel is dangerous for the inexperienced But we, we tame minutes with meticulous Methods developed in the most secret of ways Running next to the trains and raising our voices, ?Let not this slipping second buck me from my well-earned seat, This saddle lashed across the back of concepts abstract, Atop a minute molded of pure activity!? [Eastern Optimism] At Gibson?s end came small surrenders In the form of a chain-link fence And a gate with locks clicked tightly closed In an intimidating click-clack dance ?This gate! This gate!? I used to cry When it towered high above my head, ?Some day I swear I?ll be strong enough To rip it right off of its stand!? And now just a well-placed shoulder nudge Could rob it of its vertical might But if I tore it down now, If I let us all out, I?d be dealing us a terrible slight Because, unburdened, the ones here now What could they hope to do? With no gate to smash, No cage to shake, They?d have no goal of breaking through No, for now, this bastard stands With his wind-rattled icy glare For I know now What I couldn?t have guessed, That it holds not the ones who leave it there So grow with a rust-lusty sense of sickness At the Gate that holds us in And when you?re strong enough to knock it down You?ll join in knowing how weak it is. -------------- -EC Quote Link to comment
blue Posted February 9, 2006 Report Share Posted February 9, 2006 [accent=Aussie]That was some walkabout. Fair thinkum.[/accent] The next time you're in the mood to walk and think, let us know what you turn up. Looks like he's already found the key. Quote Link to comment
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