Codey Posted April 17, 2006 Report Share Posted April 17, 2006 Dancing With Mariah by Codey Swinging and swaying, in graceful dance. Random movement, as if by chance. Waving to angels as clouds fly by, whispering wisdom in barely a sigh. Roaring in anger at things unjust, obscuring vision with clouds of dust. Caressing bare skin, pale and ashen, then moving on, feeling no passion. Moving unseen in darkness or light, illusive and hidden as a woodland sprite. Surrounding all but seen by none, the proof of your passing is what you have done. Sometimes harsh, cold, unforgiving, other times warm, comforting the living. All this encompassed in cosmic blend are things that I see, when watching the wind. Link to comment
Tim Posted April 17, 2006 Report Share Posted April 17, 2006 It's only right that my first post should be here. I have this one decoded Nerky. HAHAHA It's a good one and you can give me the third degree about it this week-end. I bet I'm right too. Tim Link to comment
blue Posted April 17, 2006 Report Share Posted April 17, 2006 Codey's put more in here than you might see on the surface. No, it isn't about Mariah Carey. Think about what the poem's talking about overall and what things it suggests to you. Excellent poem, Codey. Link to comment
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