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Another Day In Paradise by WBMS

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Well, it's been a long time coming, but Another Day In Paradise is on its way to noveldom. I'm glad WBMS took all the encouragement to heart and decided to build upon that first chapter.

Having already built a good foundation with two good characters... Bam Bam, whom I liked immediately and Tibor, who remains a bit of a mystery but interesting, the intoduction of Maxfield adds still another character of interest. I am a sucker for good characters. As to plot, the death of Diego and incarceration of poor Ernie is a good start, too. The possible homophobia and arrogance of a teacher adds a bit of tension as well.

With two good chapters now online, the story has definitely captured my interest.

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Yup, some good stuff going on here. I really like Maxfield...cool kid! and i got a bit of a chuckle out of a classic freudian slip in chapter one...what a relief that no-one would mistake Tibor for an "analbino"... :wink:

Looking forward to more of this tale.

cheers,

aj

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