Jason Rimbaud Posted August 10, 2006 Report Share Posted August 10, 2006 A long time ago, I wrote this poem after reading Ann Rice vampire books. I believe that she used the phrase age of innocence. What I'm asking, is this piece original or have I abused someone else's work? Age Of Innocence This is my Age of Innocence You the children of inconvenience Now that my demons are finally invisible All those fears in your head become material You speak out against that which you don?t know Condemning me when I stand against the flow You ask, ?What is this life all about?? I reply, ?It?s not a game but it might be a rout.? I charge that you take pleasure from senseless killing While I take mine from simplistic giving I do not speak with a forked tongue This is truth I?ll shout till the war I?ve won Money is your god and he?s feeble and weak No matter how quiet you are he?ll never speak You, the human race caught up in useless lives My eyes are opened and I see through your lies You claim I am twisted and inherently evil But claiming truth from a divinity is more than feeble Your institution is crumbling and almost done Look to love and blue skies for the sun You paint me in dark reds like I am a devil Forgoing your ideas only makes me a rebel If you would like to understand what you see Delve into my mind you will find the real me I am the total evil which there is no defense Because it?s my Age and it?s my Innocence Written sometime in 1996 Link to comment
blue Posted August 11, 2006 Report Share Posted August 11, 2006 "The Age of Innocence" is a term for a historical period, as well as a term for a time in human life. So no, that in itself is not stealing an idea from someone; and although I haven't read her books, I'd say that the poem hasn't stolen from her ideas or writing. Hint: Try the Wikipedia as a research tool too. Link to comment
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