PeterSJC Posted December 29, 2020 Report Share Posted December 29, 2020 What a lovely, heart-warming story! The parallel threads (David's relationships with Brian and with Tim) came together in a very satisfying resolution. I think this story is a bit unusual in that all of the villains were off-stage. The characters whom we meet all show a great measure of benevolence, something that contributed to the good feelings I got while reading. Thank you, Nigel, for this nice present to all of your readers. Quote Link to post
Rutabaga Posted December 30, 2020 Report Share Posted December 30, 2020 Ditto to what Peter said above. I suppose we could all see Dave's part of it coming, but Brian's response was a pleasant surprise. R Quote Link to post