Jason Rimbaud Posted October 9, 2006 Report Share Posted October 9, 2006 H.R.S.A. By: Jason R. Let me take you to this place inside my mind Broken feelings angry thoughts I?ve kept inside No sugar coating here just visions of denial Come to this place and let it go and stay awhile Come with me Ecstasy Stupidity Colors line the sky like red and darkest black Look deep inside and see the reasons I held back If all the hate I have are answers that I lack Know this pain is true I?m always on attack Come with me Ecstasy Stupidity See the mirror there covered with rails of white Like absinthe it?s the drug to achieve second sight Eyes of red mixed with blue haunting me each night Nothing here but this tattered boy pale in moonlight Come with me Ecstasy Stupidity Memories of twelve-year-olds are ones I never face Trace my scars drink the tears time can not erase I was put here by my father and left in this place Recalling bite marks with visions of a dick I still taste Come with me Ecstasy Stupidity On second thought stay away from my broken mind I don?t want you here any more why did I let you inside I think I?d rather stay alone and feed my life denial It might be cold and lonely but I know I?ll stay awhile Go away from me Ecstasy Stupidity Link to comment
Guest Gabriel Duncan Posted October 10, 2006 Report Share Posted October 10, 2006 i like it. Link to comment
Camy Posted October 10, 2006 Report Share Posted October 10, 2006 This is powerful, and I think reflects your latest blog entry. It's also a very lyrical piece. The only stanza/verse I'm not sure of is the 4th, but then it's that stanza that is the point of the piece. Camy Link to comment
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