Rutabaga Posted February 6, 2021 Report Share Posted February 6, 2021 Here it is: http://www.awesomedude.com/cole-parker/betrayal/betrayal.htm Some nice and unexpected twists. Can't say more safely. R Quote Link to comment
Merkin Posted February 6, 2021 Report Share Posted February 6, 2021 Shades of O. Henry... Quote Link to comment
Camy Posted February 6, 2021 Report Share Posted February 6, 2021 For a rainy Saturday afternoon there's nothing better than a perfect Parker! Quote Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted February 6, 2021 Report Share Posted February 6, 2021 Makes me feel warm and fuzzy, comments like that. Thanks from my bottom. Oh, wait. That didn't come out right. C Quote Link to comment
Ivor Slipper Posted February 8, 2021 Report Share Posted February 8, 2021 What a totally unexpected ending! Great way to finish an excellent little story. Quote Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted February 8, 2021 Report Share Posted February 8, 2021 Thanks, Ivor. I don't usually do this, but after I finished this story, I thought my ending was insipid, so went back in and wrote the ending it now has. I get a kick out of this version, too. Much better than the maudlin one I first had. C Quote Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted February 8, 2021 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2021 5 minutes ago, Cole Parker said: Much better than the maudlin one I first had. It's a great ending, and unexpected. R Quote Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted February 8, 2021 Report Share Posted February 8, 2021 Thanks! C Quote Link to comment
Camy Posted February 9, 2021 Report Share Posted February 9, 2021 On 2/6/2021 at 6:40 PM, Cole Parker said: ...Thanks from my bottom. C Well really! 😋 Quote Link to comment
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