Guest Rustic Monk Posted January 5, 2007 Report Share Posted January 5, 2007 i dunno, i read in the rhyming dictionary about haikus. yes, that so happens to me most of my calssical training. lol. i totally didn't know what a villanelle was until someone enlightened me. complete expression the morning after marks the beginning of an inexplicable obsession; time-stamps ev'ry passing second sat waiting for the next time; the next tryst; trying hard to seperate my body from my mind; from the label ... too homogenous fighting against what should be simple; what should be complete expression Link to comment
DesDownunder Posted January 5, 2007 Report Share Posted January 5, 2007 Hi Gabe, Nice poem that conveys more every time I read it. I am mystified about the haiku description though. According to my understanding the following reference is quite comprehensive: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku However I do not want to be appear dogmatic about this as I prefer a very flexible approach to poetic expression. I am just curious about your haiku description. Des Link to comment
Guest Rustic Monk Posted January 9, 2007 Report Share Posted January 9, 2007 I dunno, dude. I'm not a haiku expert. I remember reading about different types of haiku patterns. If this is not a haiku. Then it must be in a haiku style. Happy New Year Link to comment
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