Graeme Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 David has started something new, here at AwesomeDude. His new story: Past Perfect is being posted here first, and David is looking at feedback to help him develop the story towards the eventual conclusion. As he says in the story introduction: It is my intention to ?workshop? this novel on AwesomeDude. I intend to post the novel serially, at a rate of a chapter or two per week (as I did originally with Alpha Male.) Like with Alpha Male, while I have a very firm idea of the outline of where this story is heading, I?ve left somewhat fuzzy the path I?ll take to get there. So far, only the first few chapters have been written. As a result, your constructive feedback is more than welcome. It is, indeed, a vital part of the creative process for me. It would help me if you?d periodically tell me what you like and don?t like about particular chapters, characters, and plot turns. At any given point, where do you think the story is heading? Do you want to read more? It would also help if you?d point out any egregious grammatical or spelling errors. (But please, only the egregious ones!) Awesomedude has generously offered me the opportunity of revising old, posted chapters. I can correct errors as I go. Requesting this sort of feedback would normally be done in the Bull Pen of the forums, but David is an established author with some well known and well read stories behind him. We're pleased to be working with him in his new project. Private comments can be emailed directly to David using the feedback form at the end of the chapter, or you can use this public forum if there are things you would like to discuss openly. Quote Link to comment
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