Jason Rimbaud Posted October 1, 2007 Report Share Posted October 1, 2007 The Finale By: Jason R. Written October 1st, 2007 Its five o?clock and I arrive home This house is empty I feel so alone I wonder if you?re working late There?s a message saying you?ll be home by eight I place my coat on the chair in the den Go to the kitchen and get a bottle of Zin The one you bought that time at the fair The liquid tastes bitter without you there By six o?clock the shadows fall I stare at memories lining the walls There was a time when the sun would set You?d be right beside me and the day we?d forget There?s something special about the dining room We?d light candles and romance would bloom We?d laugh and talk with nothing to say Building up for the climax on the way Holding hands start the passion there At times we never made it up the stairs Making love in the fading light Inside of you my life felt right But something happened along the way Divided by things we forgot how to say It?s bittersweet as I drink my wine Realizing that your life?s no longer mine But we still live in my fantasy In my dreams it?s still you and me Can we get back to how it used to be Here in my memory Seven o?clock and I?ve got a plan Tonight?s the night I make my last stand Maybe there in that dining room We can cut through the silence and the gloom I made a fish the kind you like A bucket and ice chilling the white The tables set and I wait for you I?m a bit nervous but play it cool At eight o?clock you walk through the door I?m standing there with a glass and I pour Hoping to see some encouraging sign I walk into the kitchen as you drink your wine You sit down and the dinner begins The talk is small like estranged friends I can?t believe the silence is there Where once our lives always shared At nine o?clock your cell phone rings And to your face a smile it brings You walk out and I wonder why I guess it?s easier than telling a lie You hang up and head off to bed I stay back realizing love is dead In my head I know I can?t fight anymore You?re just as gone as if you left out the door So here I am finally facing reality There?s nothing left of you and me We?re just another used to be Existing only in my memory Link to comment
Camy Posted October 2, 2007 Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 Jason, Brilliant, poignant, bittersweet. Your poetry gets better and better. The thing is - and I know you won't like the idea - I want to hear you read it. You'll probably say no, but think about it. Please. Camy Link to comment
dude Posted October 3, 2007 Report Share Posted October 3, 2007 Your poetry gets better and better. The thing is - and I know you won't like the idea - I want to hear you read it. Agreed... you get it on a .wav or mp3 file and we'll do the rest! Link to comment
Jason Rimbaud Posted October 3, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2007 I'm not saying I'm thinking about recording myself reading a poem. But if I would want to record myself reading my poem, how would I go about doing that? Not that I would ever want to do that. Well, maybe for the crazy emu. Perhaps. Jason R. Link to comment
Camy Posted October 3, 2007 Report Share Posted October 3, 2007 I'm not saying I'm thinking about recording myself reading a poem. But if I would want to record myself reading my poem, how would I go about doing that? Not that I would ever want to do that. Well, maybe for the crazy emu. Perhaps.Jason R. Oh YES!!!! I'll send you a pm with some information. It's not difficult! The crazy emu. Link to comment
Guest Rustic Monk Posted October 4, 2007 Report Share Posted October 4, 2007 you already know what I think about this one, so I'm just saying Nice Av Link to comment
R.J. Posted October 6, 2007 Report Share Posted October 6, 2007 Seconded. Nice avatar! Hey Jason, Great, great, great poem! Rad Link to comment
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