Tanuki Racoon Posted November 27, 2004 Report Share Posted November 27, 2004 Now, this is a fine story. You gotta love the Dudester even if it's only for the one thing he does best: Bringing us literature and not porn. Another work of art. Oddly, I vaguely remember reading something like this a long time ago. Still I was moved, quite possibly to tears. Read it. -- wbms Quote Link to comment
aj Posted November 28, 2004 Report Share Posted November 28, 2004 Yup...Dewey writes angst like nobody else in the business. Lotsa brilliant moments in this story...I remember liking it a helluva lot when i read it a while back. Good catch, Dude! cheers, AJ Quote Link to comment
Passive Posted November 28, 2004 Report Share Posted November 28, 2004 I loved it. It took me like 4 hours to read it, lol.. and i messed my eyes up, but it was worth it....i just wish there was more... Quote Link to comment
EleCivil Posted November 30, 2004 Report Share Posted November 30, 2004 Wow, that was a heartbreaker. I meant to just read one or two chapters and save the rest for later, but I couldn't stop. Jeez...now I'm going to fall asleep in class tomorrow. Note to self: Don't start long stories on school nights. Quote Link to comment
Graeme Posted November 30, 2004 Report Share Posted November 30, 2004 Elecivil -- I know exactly what you mean. I love to read, but I'm now hesitant to start reading new stories because I know I probably won't stop until I'm finished, and while I'm reading, I'm not writing.... :roll: Passive -- There is definitely more to come. I don't know what Dewey's schedule will be for posting, as he's also working on the lastest section of his Brian and Pete saga, but just be patient. Graeme Quote Link to comment
Dewey Posted December 4, 2004 Report Share Posted December 4, 2004 Thank you all for your comments. I very much appreciate your honest opinions, so if you have any criticism, feel free to lob it my direction via this or another thread, IM, PM, or e-mail. Quote Link to comment
azpeacemakers Posted December 8, 2004 Report Share Posted December 8, 2004 I finally finished reading the whole story....... I don't have words to express what I feel. Such an amazing story..... powerful.....loving and sad all in one. I can't believe how much such a relatively short story has made me feel..... so good Dewey!!! I would love to read more on this one.... maybe a second story to come? edit** I didn't know it continued at deweywrite ** Great characters!! Thank you for sharing this one with us..... and I look forward to reading more with Brian & Pete as well. You are a very talented writer and I thank you again for letting me experience it. Quote Link to comment
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