Guest Rustic Monk Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 of a dream gabriel duncan if i chose one he'd be the rebel twice bitten bared only to himself he'd be the enigma made just for me the only puzzle i'd live to complete we'd make love in our dreams and dream of forever within every waking scene it would be the kind of thing that would make a redwood turn green we'd meet in the place where our subconsciouses conspire for our connection lays deeper than our unseen desires even though i've never seen him i'll know he's there when i close my eyes i can't help but stare in my dreams i'd feel him touch me in the haze i'd hear his voice i know he's coming for me it's not something I'll avoid because i know... one day he'll arrive from far, far away as some exotic visitor familiar, but for why we cannot say but when we meet our eyes we'll realize in the gaze that the men that we fantasized of are just a handshake away Link to comment
The Mail Crew Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 This poem gives me a warm and fuzzy feeling, and it reinforces my sense of it being an okay thing for me to wait for my Mr. Right. (I'm still the only single, unattached member of our crew.) But then, that last verse might be telling me to...what? I'm not sure. Shake more hands? Look into more eyes? Re-evaluate my expectations -- as more a realist than a dreamer? Thanks for a great poem! Rain Link to comment
blue Posted April 24, 2008 Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 I think we find love best when we aren't expecting it, when we don't have a bunch of expectations built up about it. When I first met one friend, I didn't know he'd become a lifelong best friend, or that it would lead to other friends and a change in the course of my life. The ordinary can become the extraordinary, and we don't notice it until we look again. Link to comment
Guest Rustic Monk Posted April 24, 2008 Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 This poem gives me a warm and fuzzy feeling, and it reinforces my sense of it being an okay thing for me to wait for my Mr. Right. (I'm still the only single, unattached member of our crew.) But then, that last verse might be telling me to...what? I'm not sure. Shake more hands? Look into more eyes? Re-evaluate my expectations -- as more a realist than a dreamer?Thanks for a great poem! Rain To keep it true to what I meant in this poem (if I did mean anything by it): I'd have to say that the last verse probably says something about being able to meet new people. It maybe it encourages taking chances and going for the dream, or at least saying hi to that cute guy you've been watching all school year. It's true, that you find love when you least expect it. But I would think this poem was about finding something you kinda always knew was there. Or maybe it's an encouragement to hold on to that dream, and not settle for anything less. Thanks, Rain. Link to comment
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