Newbie here, looking for a brave editor =)

[JM Stewart]

Hello there,

I have frequented the Nifty, AD, and RCWP websites for years now, enjoying a lot of the stories that the authors have generously shared with all of us. Now, I'd like to see if I have enough writing skill to actually post a serialized story of my own.

I've had the idea of creating a story centered around the events of 9/11 for awhile now (since 2003 to be exact). The basic premise is that the main character, fresh out of college, loses his partner on 9/11/2001 (NOT a Mark Bingham story, but that is what gave me the idea), struggles with moving on with his life and then realizes that something positive and beautiful can result from even the most horrific tragedy.

Basically I would just be forever grateful if someone was willing to look over what I have so far, give me some pointers as far as flow, grammar, character development, etc. Please feel free to message me on here and I will let you know more if you're interested in helping me.

Thank you so much in advance!

JMS

[aj]

Hey JMS -

Congrats on taking the leap into the beautiful addiction! I'd be happy to take a look at what you've written and offer some commentary, if you're interested. You can send it to joesdoga at yahoo dot com.

cheers!

aj

[DesDownunder]

Thanks for offering to look at JMS' story, aj.

I like the scenario very much, sounds like a really good idea for a story.

[JM Stewart]

Hey Aj,

Thanks for checking it out! I sent what I have so far to your yahoo address. Let me know what you think!

JMS