ube licker Posted October 31, 2005 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2005 LOL Damien. He's one of my sources of inspiration. Anyway, I'm back and I just sent in Chapter 13. It's a halloween special and I hope you guys enjoy it when dude updates. And thank you dude and jamessavik. Link to comment
Trab Posted November 1, 2005 Report Share Posted November 1, 2005 I'm enjoying the story, but I'm not too sure that 'swindling' is the right word in this sentence. "The afternoon temperatures were swindling in triple digits." Maybe you need to drop the word "in" to make it reflect what is intended? Bart Link to comment
ube licker Posted November 1, 2005 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2005 I was comparing the heat to a swindler, someone who obtains by fraudulent means. Would dropping the 'in' reflect this? Thank you Trab. Link to comment
Trab Posted November 1, 2005 Report Share Posted November 1, 2005 Dropping the 'in' would make the temperature just under triple digits, in other words, the high nineties. Someone else will have to tell you if your intended result is being met by swindler in the current sentence. I cannot see that it does so, but I'm notoriously literal, as most here can attest. :) Link to comment
aj Posted November 3, 2005 Report Share Posted November 3, 2005 But I have to admit that I'm puzzled by the reference to temperatures as swindelers...I guess I'd better get with it and read... cheers! aj Link to comment
Trab Posted November 3, 2005 Report Share Posted November 3, 2005 Geez AJ. I'd never read your signature lines before. That's pretty hot. :) Link to comment
Damien Posted November 10, 2005 Report Share Posted November 10, 2005 Yes... so good to have another chapter of Beautiful Soul posted after such a long time.And welcome to AD forums, Damien! Thanx Dude. Wont be long and chapt 14 will be on :p Link to comment
Damien Posted November 12, 2005 Report Share Posted November 12, 2005 Chapter 14 is up Link to comment
Trab Posted November 15, 2005 Report Share Posted November 15, 2005 "...it was important to acknowledge the fact that a large percentage of teens were sexually inactive." Now that really is an important thing to acknowledge. :oops: Link to comment
EleCivil Posted November 16, 2005 Report Share Posted November 16, 2005 Loved the new chapter. The opening scene...and then that part at the end...and, you know, all that stuff in the middle. But especially the end - Ethan's thoughts as he's going to Urges. Powerful stuff. Link to comment
EleCivil Posted January 3, 2006 Report Share Posted January 3, 2006 New chapter! Yeah! Great stuff, Ube - keep it up! Link to comment
ube licker Posted January 3, 2006 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2006 Thx EleCivil. I think you're my only reader here LOL! It's ok, this site is full of great authors and you are one of them. I just realized that my profile name says I'm a poetry contributer... I'm an author and I've never written poetry for this site... :? Does anybody know how I can change that? Anyway, I love writing this story and I hope that whoever is reading it enjoys it. I know I make a lot of spelling and grammar errors so that's one thing I'll definitely be working on. I can't wait to post more chapters. Chapt 16 should be on it's way soon enough. Link to comment
Trab Posted January 3, 2006 Report Share Posted January 3, 2006 Hey, what am I? Chopped liver? I'm an avid reader too! :) Link to comment
TalonRider Posted January 4, 2006 Report Share Posted January 4, 2006 Guilty as charged. I like the story, but unfortunately, I don't always write to the author in a timely fashion. Altho there are a couple that get an almost immediate email. The last story that I finally got caught up with, I didn't write the author, but I did chat with him when I saw him online recently. In fact, I find I like chatting with an author about his/her story and I've done that a few times with Jamie. Jan Link to comment
JamesSavik Posted January 4, 2006 Report Share Posted January 4, 2006 Thx EleCivil. I think you're my only reader here LOL! It's ok, this site is full of great authors and you are one of them. Add one more reader Ube. I may not always comment but I always read Beautiful Soul. Link to comment
ube licker Posted January 4, 2006 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2006 Aww thx trab, Talonrider and Jamessavik. I understand where you come from because there are many great stories out there that I've read and never made comments on. If any of you have any criticisms (besides the spelling and grammar, which I still believe is important to a good story) or suggestions then please feel free to post them. :) Link to comment
Guest Damien_from_Oz Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 hey guys, Does anyone know the where abouts of Ube???/ Link to comment
Tanuki Racoon Posted August 14, 2008 Report Share Posted August 14, 2008 hey guys,Does anyone know the where abouts of Ube??? Have you tried a PM? I really don't know. Link to comment
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