Madrigal Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Just like the thread that forms a rope Entwined are the insults in a swirl That we call memory. For the bridge was not the cause Nor was the truck or its twirl Nor was it solely the fault of hope: A wish for a sweeter melody. It is your thoughts I find amusing, Beliefs and falsified promises of heaven That you truly think you?ll earn audience with the King. Look closely at the thread, The one behind his neck, On its face your name, Inscribed in scarlet fleck. You insist on calling it suicide But there will come a day When in his presence your resolution will stray As you realize it was homicide. Suicide is nothing more than second hand smoke. Link to comment
Smaccoms Posted September 13, 2009 Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 Very intriguing, I like it. The metaphors and such are complicated enough to make you stop and think as you're reading it. This is definitely one I'll read a few times over time. Link to comment
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