Dewey Posted March 5, 2005 Report Share Posted March 5, 2005 Okay, I'm not one to hawk my own wares, but I would like some feedback on this piece, if you wouldn't mind too terribly. :-D Thanks. -Dewey Quote Link to comment
Thirdeye Posted March 5, 2005 Report Share Posted March 5, 2005 I thought it was very good and was a very good fit with the rest of the stories. Quote Link to comment
JamesSavik Posted March 6, 2005 Report Share Posted March 6, 2005 One tendency that almost everyone has in common is to turn away from things that are unpleasent or difficult to deal with. Many people aren't even conscious of doing this. I can relate to the characters in this story series. As I became an older teenager, my Dad began to retreat further and further into his work until he was gone for months at a time. There's nothing more unpleasent to deal with than a sullen, angry teenager. Nor is there anything more important to do. Quote Link to comment
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