Judges a short poem by Codey

[Codey]

Judges

a short poem by Codey

Our path may be strewn with obstacles

as through this life we're trudging.

Many of these we erect ourselves

when we, ourselves, are judging.

And tho by many we may be judged,

as our lives we're trying to get through,

the only judgement that matters

is the Supreme judicial review

[blue]

Thanks, Codey.

That self-judgment or self-criticism is tough. You might not know it, but you hit the nail on the head.

Thanks again.

~Blue

[petefromoz]

Codey,

Words to live by.

Lovely cadence and insightful observations; my favourite kind of poem.

Thanks for another great, thought-provoking piece.

Regards,

Pete

[Naiilo]

Very good. When do we get to hear more, young poet? I'm looking forward to what else you might have instore for us.

-Naiilo

[Codey]

Most of my poems are at http://tragicrabbit.org/

if you go there just go to Codey's Corner and you'll find them.

Thanks guys for the kind words :D

Codey