bi_janus Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 Seagull on a breezy Pacific shore Bi_janus Sometimes on one At others none. Absurd dandelion. Link to comment
blue Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 Or sometimes in the middle. Alas, no absurd dandelions in my yard, though I think the grass will eventually grow back from the drought. Main reactions? (A) Keep going! (B) OK, not sure how the title and lines relate, but I'll nod sagely, 'cause I liked the lines. Link to comment
bi_janus Posted December 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 I suppose a poem shouldn't require explication, so I'll just comment on the circumstance that caused its writing. At the beach on a blustery day, I watched a seagull standing on one leg, the wind ruffling its feathers, which stuck out in all directions. Eventually, the bird rested with its breast against the sand. Link to comment
blue Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 Aha, now I get it. Thanks! Link to comment
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