bi_janus Posted January 14, 2012 Report Share Posted January 14, 2012 The Bleeding Moment (1971) Bi_janus I have enough just now, maybe forever. Two into one, we stick together here and there. With no one else, we summoned this perfect moment. If we lie here breathless, will we compel this perfect moment to bleed into the next and the next and the next? If we lie here at ease, will this perfect moment harden and clot? Will a sheath scab around its vital ooze? If we arise, will the husk of this perfect moment suffice? If not, when will the roughness of this perfect moment’s scar no longer attract our unthinking caresses? Quote Link to comment
Gee Whillickers Posted January 14, 2012 Report Share Posted January 14, 2012 Oh my. That's some imagery! Quote Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted January 14, 2012 Report Share Posted January 14, 2012 Yikes! C Quote Link to comment
bi_janus Posted January 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2012 Come on, guys. No one bled in creating that moment. You've never thought of time as blood flow? Quote Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted January 14, 2012 Report Share Posted January 14, 2012 Come on, guys. No one bled in creating that moment. You've never thought of time as blood flow? I will admit it never occured to me to consider time as blood flow! C Quote Link to comment
Camy Posted January 15, 2012 Report Share Posted January 15, 2012 Great imagery! Quote Link to comment
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