seanriter Posted June 23, 2005 Report Share Posted June 23, 2005 Hi all, I am Sean just joined the site. Check out my poem and let know what you think. Senseless or sensible suicide Saluting the sepulchral silence Sundering seductive songs spell Solitude sways the soul to sleep Deaths determined delirium Dousing doleful depression as Dire doldrums derisively drawl Dark dusk demands deathly deed Bravely besting life?s jest Bleed blood to blissful burst Brandish bestial bayonets just Banishing black bigotry to dust Goodbye to fatal fears Goodbye to fanatical faith Goodbye to fantasized future Goodbye to phantom freedom Quote Link to comment
Naiilo Posted June 24, 2005 Report Share Posted June 24, 2005 Hello. Welcome to the forums. I take you are one for alliteration? -N Quote Link to comment
Guest rusticmonk86 Posted June 24, 2005 Report Share Posted June 24, 2005 Awesome. Welcome! Quote Link to comment
blue Posted June 24, 2005 Report Share Posted June 24, 2005 Personally, posit positive passages preferentially. Options optimistic overcome others overlooked. Obviate oppressive, obsessive, opposed to life's ongoing. Quote Link to comment
seanriter Posted June 24, 2005 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2005 Thanx for the warm welcome, I appreciate it. For the record, this poem was my experiment in rhyming. I wrote it in one of my darkest moments. I hope all those who read it, look at its literary value (if at all there is any) rather than the feelings/import it conveys. I know it is impossible to separate the both, but I want it known that its not my intention to influence the readers towards negativity. Sean Quote Link to comment
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