vwl Posted July 27, 2012 Report Share Posted July 27, 2012 In Nifty's college section there is an story called Noah and Jordan by Ethan Y at http://www.nifty.org...oah-and-jordan/ that shows quality and drawbacks. Plusses: a nice buildup of a relationship, good characters, angst Negative: some overdone angst, need for a proofreader, extremely irregular updates Okay, not great. Quote Link to comment
jnwrx1 Posted January 4, 2015 Report Share Posted January 4, 2015 Negative: some overdone angst, need for a proofreader, extremely irregular updates Okay, not great. The negatives here are intensifying through the run of the story, especially the overdone angst and extremely irregular updates. The buildup of the relationship was good, but now the author seems bent on ripping it apart, again. They could long ago have ended the story on a completed and satisfying note. Quote Link to comment
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