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  • 2 years later...

Negative: some overdone angst, need for a proofreader, extremely irregular updates

Okay, not great.

The negatives here are intensifying through the run of the story, especially the overdone angst and extremely irregular updates.

The buildup of the relationship was good, but now the author seems bent on ripping it apart, again. They could long ago have ended the story on a completed and satisfying note.

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