Paul_and_Paco Posted August 1, 2012 Report Share Posted August 1, 2012 I ran across this nice little serial novel in the YoungFriends section of Nifty a few days ago. It is written by Brian Roberson. The story is not the typical love story found on Nifty, and especially in the YoungFriends section. At present there are eleven chapters, and he seems to be posting every three days, so the wait will not be long before the finish. I had no problem with the editing, and it seemed to flow quite well. Below is a short excerpt... Later that night, Quincy all of a sudden found himself awake in the dark. He looked at the clock and it said 2:30. As he looked at the time, the digital image of the numbers began to flicker in and out. He then heard that same giggle as he did earlier, only this time it wasn't distant. As a matter of fact , it came right from inside the room. His heart froze in his chest as he heard the giggle again. It sounded like a boy. He quickly turned over towards the sound. On his desk, in the dark, he saw a figure sitting indian style on top of his desk. He bolted for the lamp and turned on the switch. To his utter shock and disbelief, he saw a nude blond boy sitting on top of his desk. He had a big grin on his face and his hands on his knees. "Hi!" The kid said as he waved. "Wh....who....who are you...?" Quincy asked, his voice trembling. The boy leaned back and laughed. It was a friendly and hearty laugh. "I'm Erik. Who are YOU?" He laughed. "How did you get in here? Why don't you have any clothes on?" Erik laughed and jumped off the desk. Quincy could see his little dangling penis bobbing around as he hit the floor. He then ran giggling into the closet and shut the door. "Hey, hey, wait a minute!" Quincy said. He then got out of bed and ran to the closet. He then opened the door, and to his utter horror, there was no one in there. "Mom! MOM! MOM!!!" Quincy cried out. Quincy's parents came running down the hallway full speed. Dad was in his underwear and Mom was in her nightgown. "Quincy, what's wrong? What happened?" Steve croaked. "I don't know, I ...I..." Quincy then hesitated. He suddenly didn't think that it was a good idea to tell his parents that he saw a naked boy in his bedroom who suddenly vanished into thin air. "I ...had a nightmare I guess." Quincy finally said. Quincy's parents both stayed and comforted him for a few minutes before shuffling bleary eyed back to their bedroom. After they left,he sat for a few seconds and tried to figure out what had just happened. He also thought about that freaked out mover from earlier in the day. Eventually he got his composure back and decided to try to go back to sleep. As he was about to turn off the lamp, he heard the closet door squeak a little. He watched as it opened halfway. He then saw the naked boy peek around the corner of the door. He sat and watched in horror. "Thanks for not ratting me out to your folks." He said. "R-r-ratting you out...?" Qunicy And That Unusual Friend of His can be found at http://www.nifty.org...unusual-friend/ I hope you enjoy it as much as I have, and if you do... give Brian a thumbs-up email. Quote Link to comment
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