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BLIND

Why can't you see what you've done?

Turn on the moon that spun your lies.

Heading for pastures in the gleaming sun,

laughing as he falls from the sky.

Forgetting all the times he lit the way,

how in your darkness he stood by your side.

Why can't you understand what you've become?

A solar flare burning out of time.

But what is left when you've had your fun,

when you betray those who Worshipped your sign

Those who refused to let you get lost.

Those who now feel dull beneath your great shine.

It's a shame that someone so bright could be so blind.

But if you stay with the sun too long,

you?re sure to be burned.

Friend

How did you just walk away?

Just up and left me behind.

Haven't sent word of your new life.

You said you were a friend,

yet you display how little you care.

Our paths may never cross again.

Does that thought keep your eyes open at night?

Never let me know you were leaving,

yet I can't stand to be angry.

Could be you lay extinct somewhere,

and I couldn't deal with that shame.

But if not anger what can I feel?

What is it I can use to hide the pain?

How can someone mean so much to me,

yet seem to have no respect?

I'm dealing though.

Yep, I'll get by.

You were a friend.

Yep, what a lie.

Goodbye

Its must be nice to know that

someone cares so much about you.

Don't show it though.

Refuse to face this,

treat it all as if its

some kind of game.

I?m not asking you to feel it too,

just don't ask me to be ashamed.

I wish you'd stay here

with me.

I'm saying I need you,

to be free.

I just can't get it right.

I can't say it tonight.

Hurt

I've been away for awhile I know.

We both needed time to think,

time to heal this vibrant sting.

But all it did was make it clear.

So many feelings left unsaid,

too many hurts left undead.

I know we?re at the point

where we both try to point our fingers.

I've been away for awhile I know.

We both needed time to think,

time to heal this vibrant sting.

But all it did was make it clear.

So many feelings left unsaid,

too many hurts left undead.

I know we?re at the point

where we both try to point our fingers,

that reason fades and blame lingers.

But I can't do that to us,

after everything we have been through.

I stand here better for having known you,

even if its time to say goodbye.

We no long walk side by side,

the credits are rolling, everyone's gone.

Leaving us to fall alone.

We just seem to hurt each other the harder that we try.

I hope you don't take this as if I don't care.

The pain is almost more than I can bear.

Its ripping me apart but I just know its time.

I no longer make you happy,

I see it in your eyes.

The hardest part is doing it alone.

When I've hurt in the past,

I always turned to you.

When I needed to talk you were the ears.

I can't do that now and it scares me,

like learning to breath again.

Thanks to Gaby for editing this junk I had written months and months ago and making me believe it was decent

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Guest rusticmonk86

I like it, it's raw.

I like Blind the best, I think. It makes my head spin, in a stacatto, non rhyming and pleasant sort of way.

And Goodbye. I'll only pick two because there are four. And because I like them all. So Friend and Hurt are nice, too. (Listed in no particular order.)

BTW, the Angel thread was awesome.

Glad you didn't disappear.

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I like it, it's raw.

I like Blind the best, I think.  It makes my head spin, in a stacatto, non rhyming and pleasant sort of way.

And Goodbye.  I'll only pick two because there are four.  And because I like them all.  So Friend and Hurt are nice, too.  (Listed in no particular order.)

BTW, the Angel thread was awesome.

Glad you didn't disappear.

Thanks a lot!!

Nope didn't disappear just met a great guy and well you now how that goes

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