Pedro Posted October 17, 2015 Report Share Posted October 17, 2015 Would anybody be able to give a short (1500word) story the once over please. As much to see if you think it worth submission, as well general edit. Problem is the Dude wants the finished product by 24 October. I also have another non Halloween story about 7000 words, centred around a boy and a cat. If anyone would be kind enough to volunteer to look at it please. There are a couple of points that I know I need a second opinion, as well as anything else you find. Thanks Pedro Quote Link to comment
colinian Posted October 18, 2015 Report Share Posted October 18, 2015 Hi Pedro, If no one else has said yes, send them to me. colin@colinian.com. Colin Quote Link to comment
Nigel Gordon Posted October 18, 2015 Report Share Posted October 18, 2015 Hi Pedro If you can get it to me sometime today I'll have a look at it for you. You have my contact details. Regards Nigel Quote Link to comment
Pedro Posted October 18, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2015 Thanks guys On its way. Quote Link to comment
dude Posted October 18, 2015 Report Share Posted October 18, 2015 I also have another non Halloween story about 7000 words, centred around a boy and a cat. If anyone would be kind enough to volunteer to look at it please. There are a couple of points that I know I need a second opinion, as well as anything else you find. A boy and a cat? Now that is sure to be a "dude-pleaser," Quote Link to comment
Pedro Posted October 31, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2015 Hi Nigel and Colin Thank you for your help with both stories. Pedro Quote Link to comment
colinian Posted November 1, 2015 Report Share Posted November 1, 2015 You're welcome, Pedro. I enjoyed reading both of your stories, and look forward to reading more in the future (hint, hint, nudge, nudge). Colin Quote Link to comment
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