Cole Parker Posted December 19, 2015 Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 Another gem by Nigel. He never disappoints. Short and sweet. Read it here: http://www.awesomedude.com/nigel_gordon/the-christmas-visit/the-christmas-visit.htm Link to comment
Graeme Posted December 19, 2015 Report Share Posted December 19, 2015 A nice twist at the end. Loved it! Link to comment
Gee Whillickers Posted December 20, 2015 Report Share Posted December 20, 2015 Very nicely done. One of those stories where, after reading the ending, I have to go and read the entire thing again from a new perspective. Love it. Link to comment
Jeff Ellis Posted December 20, 2015 Report Share Posted December 20, 2015 Yes, a very nicely structured story where you know there will be an interesting end... and there is. So then you wonder if you missed any clues on the way. Well done Nigel, I enjoyed it immensely. Link to comment
Chris James Posted December 20, 2015 Report Share Posted December 20, 2015 What a sweet little bit of misdirection by Nigel...I had no idea where this story was going. I spent considerable time trying to place the storyline in context with something I might know and discovered...well, nothing. It wasn't necessary for the impact Nigel intended, this could take place anywhere they might celebrate Christmas. Well done. Link to comment
ChrisR Posted December 24, 2015 Report Share Posted December 24, 2015 One must learn with you: Expect the unexpected. Well done! Link to comment
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