Would anybody be able to give a short (1500word) story the once over please.
As much to see if you think it worth submission, as well general edit.
Problem is the Dude wants the finished product by 24 October.
I also have another non Halloween story about 7000 words, centred around a boy and a cat. If anyone would be kind enough to volunteer to look at it please. There are a couple of points that I know I need a second opinion, as well as anything else you find.
Thanks
Pedro