[To Be Me a poem by Codey]

Gonna march in your army Codey,woo hoo,cool poem :smt066 :smt023

[The Untouched Boy by TR]

good poem,and hits home alot :smt032

[All-Nighter]

way cool poem :smt023 just hope wasn't you

[Ars Moriendi]

its true life.good poem :smt036

[Uppercase I]

Wow,that was very good :smt036 :clap:

[My Love Is Like a Red, Red Rose-a TR poem]

LMAO, to cool :smt066

[Do You Know Me]

You call me son

and gave me a name

The little guy you said

always laughed and smiled.

As i got older

so many feelings inside

A different look

things i grew to hide

Questioning my feelings

so afraid they wouldn't leave

Having to accept them

ashamed to admit were me.

Someday you will know the real me

the boy who crys wanting you to see

Wishing you could see into my eyes

the love and hurt inside

So much of me is lost forever

hoping you will understand

The secret i hold

is still the boy you used to know

Do you know me

[The End of Twilight a poem by Codey]

says it all,awesome poem Codey :smt023 :smt036

[Poem: I am what I am I fear no consequence]

:smt023

[All My Old Boyfriends-a TR poem]

Thanks Tr,i definately will read them,and yes i think Codeys "Unicorn" poem is totally awesome :smt025

[You Are So Cold-a TR poem]

gotta love it, as you eagerly read on,what a cool ending,lol

i do like your style :smt023

[Fireflies]

way cool, (applause) 8)

[All My Old Boyfriends-a TR poem]

LOL, thats way cool, hehe :-D

[I Danced With Unicorns]

i'm almost speechless,i think this is maybe the best i've read Codey.I don't know what to say,except its awesome. 8)

[Carousel]

only one spelling mistake ,lol thanks for letting me know,i fixed it :oops:

[Carousel]

Carousel

trying one without my editors help :-)

Random thoughts

on a never ending carousel

Stopping occasionally

to add excitement,bewilderment,confusion

To grasp ahold of one

needing a grip so tight

Trying to make sense

find a place where it belongs

Mostly imaginary

dreams we wish will come true

For true happiness and love

seeking the courage to be

Being just me

The carousel keeps turning

always bringing a new day

As long as it keeps going

theres hope for better days

DJ :-)

["Dreams" a short one]

Thanks guys :o .James i tried to reply back to you,but its not letting me send PM,but thanks.No AJ,i will think a little better as to what too i use,i've seen the "to" posts ,i have to learn the right ones

["Dreams" a short one]

The alarm go's off

reality slipping back into consciousness

eyes begging to remain closed

Faint thoughts and shadows

from the minds night wanderings

not really remembering

to illusive to grasp and hold.

[The Next Step]

thanks guys :-)

i don't consider myself a poet,just sometimes due to emotions,and feelings about stuff,i think about trying to say how i'm feeling,wish it was for different reasons.Codey has been a very good friend of mine,and is helping me alot,through friendship,and showing me how to express things alot better.Hopefully if i can do another poem,will be a little brighter one.thank you for the nice replys :-)

[The Next Step]

thanks Codey,for helping me with it,make it sound little intelligent :D ,but the food thing,that will take time,thank you my friend

[The Next Step]

"The Next Step"

by DJ

Remembering a time,when so simple were things

that could make me smile,could make me dream.

The older I become,and with doors opening to me,

I'm still hanging onto the safe things around me.

Stepping forward so tentatively,I'm not sure i'm ready

for where life will lead me.

Trying to find confidence and courage within,

but feeling so fragile while hiding in this shell.

Afraid to take the next step in my life,

and knowing everyone has too.

Wishing I had a hand to guide me,

To show others,whats inside me.

The real me.

[Nothing a poem by Codey]

Leaves alot to the imagination

For once you have left me speechless :roll: