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Nevius

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  1. I agree that the story should be added to best of nifty. And also agree it could use a thorough pass by an editor. Yet despite the extra effort it takes it is worth it for the depth of characters and setting. I somehow feel it is not going to be a long story either. Spring is coming. Let's hope we're not disappointed.

  2. I have to agree with Jan. I think TOSOM is a great story but it would be worth it for Dom to crank out the last two chapters...or how ever many he decides to do. This is definately a story that works better reading straight through without long gaps. All of Dom's stories have been great...I can't wait for him to finish this one so he can get back to finish his previous one!!!

  3. Jamie,

    It is always a pleasure to see a new chapter posted...I can certainly understand the experiments of Pavlov. LOL I just wish your chapters came out more frequently...yes, it's a good addiction though. Although it just gives me more time to stay current with all of the other writers here at AD.

    I have one serious request though. A Map. I have tried to lay one down but without reading all of the way through again I don't remember enough to make it accurate. It would make it easier to understand all of the movement that is now taking place.

    I wouldn't mind helping out either.

    What do you think?

    Nevius

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