Tien
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Hi
I have been writting poems since I don't remember when, but this is the first time that I actually post one of them. So, comment of most welcome, however, please be gentle, :oops: .
Ubobtainable Love
By: Tien
The thing about love
Is that it comes and goes
With the breifness of time
Time flow, it flows
It comes to you
On bright summer days
And leave you cold
In its wake
In its present
joyous reign
But in its absent
Eternal rain
Generation after generation
Endlessly sought
Only to slip away
breifly abort
Unobtainable love
Is the fuel of imagination
But beware, for its reality
will leave you in desolation
Well, that's it. Tell me what you think, like I say all comments are welcome.
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Hi
I had just finish the story, and it was awesome. Thank you Josh for writting it. You can be sure that i'm putting you at the top of my list of favorite authors.
Tien
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No, not at all
you guys are great. I'm glad to be getting any comments at all. Comments imply that you guys actually read and analyze the poem and care enough to tell me about it. Critique or compliment, I'll always listen (or should I say read? lol).
Tien