[Just another dream...]

Well thank you very much for your words, I greatly appreciate your thoughts on the poem. I agree with you on the title and I guess I hadn't really put the thought into that piece of it, but I see your point now that I do.

Glad you enjoyed it =)

~Tyler

[Ex is the Thing]

Wow I really liked this. I always enjoy a well written poem that manages to rhyme as well, brilliant.

[Just another dream...]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it~

[Just another dream...]

My eyes alight as I look into his

Time freezing where our gazes meet

The flame in my heart, smoldering for so long

Rekindled in an instant by his warm smile

He seems so far away

I move towards him but I feel slower than molasses

Tears of joy streaming down my face

Finally we embrace

His strong arms wrapping around me

Holding me close

I bury my face in his chest

My breath warm on his skin

I hear his heartbeat in time to mine

He runs his fingers through my hair

Down my neck

Whispering sweet words of love in my ear

I look up into his eyes

Forgetting everything in the world

My legs barely keeping me up

Going wobbly

He leans in close

I feel the light stubble brush across my face

It tickles?

Our lips meet in a sensation explosion

My love pouring out of my soul through my lips

I close my eyes, my head spinning

If only this moment could last forever

I open my eyes again to find?

He?s gone?

The sunlight dancing through my window?

Xzor64 ?2008

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