[Atop A Wall]

What are you talkin about?

I was being serious, i can rarely understand poems - but i could actually follow his.

[Atop A Wall]

Wow, that was awesome, i could actually follow it. :)

[NWS - New Brother by Graeme]

ah...ya!

i gotcha now..lol..i'm a little slow..

Maybe it'd be better to change the pov now..lol

or switch between the 2

[NWS - New Brother by Graeme]

Great come back chapter :D

i'm glad you didn't change the chatacter pov..

i think that might take a little away from the story..

[Looking In The Mirror]

Maybe Benee?

[Looking In The Mirror]

You could always change your name..lol

I am going to, i hate mine...once i'm old enough , that is..lol

[Falls Creek Lessons]

Another great chapter :)

I can't wait to see where Dan and Greg go..:D

And dracula can't get AIDs...cuz you can't cross dieseases...so a vampire couldn't get human AIDs.

[Looking In The Mirror]

Thanks.

I also think i figured out why they are so messed up.

I write them at school..lol.

um, so lemme get this straight, you hate 'y's...but you have a y in your name?lol

[Looking In The Mirror]

What the shit?

lol..

You all have gone insayne? lol..;)

D & D

Death and destruction

It's all that i see

This war that's going on

Inside of me

Looking to the sky to cure my pain

Looking to the ground for a place

to live in vain

[Looking In The Mirror]

Oh my fucking god!

Codey!

1) You work to much

It should be too!....right? lol

[Looking In The Mirror]

lol

you're crazy!

theory of life is

You work hard your whole life, and have no time to enjoy it.

[Looking In The Mirror]

Thanks guys,

I just...got a lot of crap that i'm tryin to get through..

and it's tough when i can't be myself, which you guys probably know all about...

ps.

I watch Lots of tv..lol.. ER,The OC, 24, and some other ones..lol.

[Looking In The Mirror]

Sorry, Blue, If i came off as an asshole..and i didn't know i flamed anyone, so..anyways..sorry for that too.:(

I get whatcha guys are sayin though, but yall'n's are older than me..and have had the experience?.eh....and i don't really like thinking..lol...arg..

I'm sorry, i'm a fucking idiot.

[Looking In The Mirror]

I just don't like lying to people...and i have to do it every fuckin day..and it sucks

and i hate my family, lol, and almost everyone else around me...

..but i usually try and hold my emotions in....then let them all explode at once...

and i have no future..

[Looking In The Mirror]

hmm..i suppose..

i dunno what this is.

You see today

But you don't see tomorrow

Drowning in

Your own sea of sorrow

arg..i got a few more..but they are hard to read..lol

It seems to me

The world today

Is a world away

Laws and governing are

Long and humbling

We can't hold you to it

But you sure can do it

I hope you fucking die

You will fucking fry

All because you lie

Goodbye Goodbye

I hope you

Die Die Die

The fecal matter all over your face

You look like a big wet pile of waste

Can you not give me my space?

You big fucking pile of waste

eh...can't read 1 word from this other one..lol.

There is no doubt in my head

That you are dead

But i keep making your bed

So you can rest your head

I watched you get shot

I held you while you died

I can't stand life without you

I keep thinking about you

They say you died painlessy

They lied

I heard you

Cough

Bed

Choke

And cry out in pain

.......and the last 2 lines are crossed out for some reason..lol

don't worry people! i am on medication and will probably be going to a counciler...lol

anyways, thanks for taking the time to read my shitty poems (if you can even call them that)

[Looking In The Mirror]

Thanks..

And, when i look in the mirror i see myself, lol

But..i guess emotional-wise? or somethin...that is what i see.

[Looking In The Mirror]

You can't see me

But I see you

Anger

Hate

Pain

Are all that I see

I'm looking in the mirror

eh?..lol..i suck

[A Hero In Writing]

Awesome!!

[Falls Creek Lessons]

Loved the latest chapter :)

....don't know what else to say..lol

[A Hero In Writing]

Wow! I love it already! :)

Good Job, keep up the good work :)

[Falls Creek Lessons]

I think you should keep doin it, it's really nice to know what other people are thinking.

[About A hero in the hallways.]

I read Hero in the Hallways...i really liked it, so when i read your post...i thought Mr. Black Sings A sad song was part 2..cuz i read it too fast...lol....but..they are both kick ass!!

good job

keep up the good work :D

[RIP Dimebag]

:(

So fucked up...:(

[Life From A Distance: Ben]

I loved it.

It took me like 4 hours to read it, lol.. and i messed my eyes up, but it was worth it....i just wish there was more...

[Leaves and Lunatics by EleCivil]

wow! kick ass job on the new chapters.

oh...and thanks for the fucking cliff-hanger!! lol..