[Gay Rights Group Slams Cheney]

Hm mm I wonder if you would mind clarifying that James?

Do you mean that the serial killers were described as being homosexual or were the serial killers killing homosexuals?

Thanks

I thought he meant that they were talking about homosexuals killing the serial killers

[Recollections]

Thanks for the feedback guys...i will say one thing about this comment

It was more a collection of memories, rather than a meander. A meander would lead from one point to the next and the reader would just follow

I really meant for it to be that way. That's why I called it Recollections But I know what you mean and that's why I came here for help with it. I'd never try to post it anywhere but in a forum like this one or in my own forum at GA, but I'm glad I put it here because I got the honest criticism I wanted. Not that I don't get lots of critisism already.......um, wait, that didn't come out right.

[Recollections]

1. The blue on black/grey background is hard on the eyes. I highlighted the post to make it blue on white before I could comfortably read it.

Graeme

I wouldn't know what you're talking about, Graeme

[Recollections]

Yes...feedback is exactly what Im looking for....you probably read it at Codey's World. The reason I postedit here was for some critism. I'm trying to change my style a little bit, and this is my first try at something different from what I normally write. Anyway, thanks for the info and I'll look into what you said...anyone else???

[Recollections]

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