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Gee Whillickers

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  1. Wow, that was just a wonderful story!

    Or, to quote a line from a wonderful story I just read from an excellent writer:

    “Wow!” Jim ejaculated. “Really! I knew there was something I liked about you.”

    Heheheh.

    Thanks Cole. That was really fun. The climactic scene was perfect.

  2. So there I was last night, thinking that even though I prefer to wait for stories to be complete before reading them, I'll just take a quick look at the first few paragraphs before heading off to bed.

    Suddenly, I reached the end of Chapter 10, I realized it was way, way past my bedtime, and I was going to pay for it. Which I did.

    But was it ever worth it! Excellent story so far. I look forward to more.

  3. Many years ago a former acquaintance alleged he witnessed the following when held at traffic lights.

    Workman in trench next to waiting traffic starts digging and breaks his shovel. Throwing the pieces in the trench he stomps off with this tirade:

    "The f...ing f...ers f...ing f...ed, f... It!"

    That's fucking hilarious.

  4. One of the best pieces of writing advice I came across was this: Never forget that you, the writer, are not the narrator. You're the writer, and the narrator is fictional. The narrator is part of the story, and the writer chooses what kind of narrator that story is going to have, which can change the tone and impact of the story to a large degree. It is part of the story process, part of character development.

    Therefore it is perfectly reasonable to think a story could have a narrator that uses a lot of spicy language. It depends of the effect being sought.

  5. Story time, and it's even a Halloween story.

    When I was a youngster, maybe nine or ten years old, right around Halloween my older brother bought a record (yeah, remember those?) that contained various horror sound effects. Each track was accompanied by a little description on the liner trying to dramatize the effects.

    One of the tracks was of someone who had been buried alive. The sound was a man supposedly scratching the inside of a coffin while breathing hard, weeping, and screaming.

    I remember reading the little blurb while listening to this in my brother's room.

    I was horrified. Absolutely horrified. My imagination ran wild, and the vision in my head was disturbing in the way only a very badly scared child can be disturbed.

    I had trouble sleeping for a day or two, and whenever my brother would bring the record came out I made myself scarce, immediately. It absolutely petrified me, the very notion of being buried alive.

    I got over it, but every now and then something will remind me of that, and the wisp of a memory will come back and remind me how I felt back then, being deathly afraid of being buried alive with no hope.

    So, yeah, thanks for the word of the day, Cole. Harumph.

    :angry:

    :icon_thumright::icon_thumright:

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