Guest Rustic Monk Posted January 7, 2008 Report Share Posted January 7, 2008 Short Portrait of Another Hopeless Alcoholic Gabriel Duncan Let me tell you about a woman Forty, maybe forty-five Who pickles herself While she?s still alive She has three kids And a house for free But it?s not ?cause of what she did Now listen to me Her breath is like death Her eyes keep a vacant stare If you were to kill her child I?m sure that she?d be unaware But touch her vodka You?d better think twice It?s the only joy That keeps this mama nice In the morning She has herself a screwdriver A little later She makes herself a dacqouri Before three She pours herself half of the bottle By four She hits five more At full throttle Well, her sense of reality Might be greatly skewed Because she never leaves She says, it?s hardly an issue Locked behind the blinds Like doing hard time Living in her bubble Sanity is hard to find . Link to comment
DesDownunder Posted January 8, 2008 Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 So Gabe, you knew my mother? Outstandingly accurate portrait, and a great poem. Link to comment
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